“That all Joseph’s ten brothers lamented for their criminal action and requested Joseph for his forgiveness and
told that their father wept too much on Joseph’s thought and almost lost his eye power to see. “
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All of Joseph’s ten brothers lamented their criminal actions and requested that Joseph forgive them, telling him that their father had wept so much while thinking of Joseph that his vision was failing and he was almost blind.