It was their first time that they dined out with their new friend

[Angelwings]

Are the sentences below grammatically correct?

1. It was their first time that they dined out with their new friend.

2. After breakfast, Jake drove the children to school.

3. That night, before the children went to bed, Jake read them a bedtime story.

[Torsten]

@Angelwings

It was their first time that they dined out with their new friend.

It was the first time they had dinner with their new friend.

@Angelwings

After breakfast, Jake drove the children to school.

After breakfast, Jake drove the kids to school.

@Angelwings

That night, before the children went to bed, Jake read them a bedtime story.

That night, before the kids went to bed, Jake read them a bedtime story.