It states that Rewording of sentence

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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According to a press release from NTUC FairPrice on Apr 9, it states that: “All food sampling activities have also ceased. Cleaning regimes have been stepped up, especially for high-touch surfaces like railings, trolleys, baskets, checkout counters, to every four hours”.

…it states that “All food sampling activities…”

Should it be ‘… it states, “All food sampling activities…”’? with “that” removed?

Thanks!

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This entire phrase should be removed because ‘according to a press release’ should be followed the quote from the press release.

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