it is very important to make large amounts of money

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Topic. Some people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Which point of view do you support? Give reasons.

Many people are satisfied to earn a comfortable living but I think they are selfish and idle. In my opinion, it is important to make amount of money as large as possible. By means of money, we can do a lot of useful things such as helping people and caring family.

First of all, it is so selfish of many people to hide themselves under the happiness and idleness of a comfortable living. They only care about their life and happiness while ignoring the fact that there are many poor people and the disadvantaged in the outside world, who need help and support. Moreover, stopping working and satisfying the comfort can turn those people to be the idle who are unable to work effectively in the future, which means part of society that produce goods has disappeared.

Secondly, as long as people know how to spend money wisely, money is never considered excessive. There are countless activities that we can do with large amount of money, such as caring our families, buying businesses, helping people and promoting society. As we all know, Bill Gate is rich and always able to stop working but he still tries every single day to help poor people, run his foundation, and promote society. We should ask ourselves if our children have already had good education, and if our neighbors have been lifted out of poverty.

Finally, there are always unexpected situations in life that no one can predict; having spare money, we will be able to handle those difficulty. For example, if one of our friends is in debts and threatened by creditor, we can help him, which both promotes our friendship and save our friend. For another example, if a company is going bankrupt, soliciting any possible help, we can help, which saves both the company and hundreds of employees.

For all the reasons above, I am sure that it is always better for us to have amount of money as large as possible. By means of money, we can care well our families; we can spend money on promoting our society by helping, and can always handle difficulties in our lives.

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Topic. Some people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money, while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living. Which point of view do you support? Give reasons.

Many people are satisfied to earn a comfortable living(,) but I think they are selfish and idle. In my opinion, it is important to make AS LARGE AN amount of money as large as possible. /By means of money/WITH MONEY/HAVING MONEY/, we can do a lot of useful things such as helping people and caring TAKING CARE OF OUR family.

First of all, it is so selfish of many people to hide themselves under the happiness and idleness of a comfortable living. They only care about their life and happiness while ignoring the fact that there are many poor people and the AND disadvantaged PEOPLE in the outside world who need help and support. Moreover, stopping working and BEING SATISFIED WITH WHAT YOU HAVE satisfying the comfort can turn those people to beCOMING the idle ONES who are unable to work effectively in the future, which means part of society that produce goods WILL HAVE disappeared.

Secondly, as long as people know how to spend money wisely, money is never considered excessive. There are countless activities that we can do with A large amount of money, such as caring FOR our families, buying businesses, helping people and promoting society. As we all know, Bill Gate is rich and IS always able to stop working(,) but he still tries every single day to help poor people(.) HE runS his foundation, and promoteS society. We should ask ourselves if our children have already had A good education, and if our neighbors have been lifted out of poverty.

Finally, there are always unexpected situations in life that no one can predict; having spare money, we will be able to handle those difficultIES. For example, if one of our friends is in debt and threatened by HIS creditor, we can help him, which both promotes our friendship and saveS our friend. For another example, if a company is going bankrupt, soliciting any possible help, we can help, which saves both the company and THE JOBS OF hundreds of employees.

For all the reasons above, I am sure that it is always better for us to have AN amount of money as large as possible. By means of money, we can care well our families; we can spend money on promoting our society by helping, and can always handle difficulties in our lives.
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