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Topic: Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
There has been a heated debate concerning the necessity of learning better by ourselves than with a teacher. In fact, there is a growing sentiment that put more emphasis on the importance of having a teacher to learn with, which is always a better choice. In my opinion, I concur with the latter for two primary reasons.
First of all, the most important reason is that teacher can help their students solve many difficult problems while learning the new lessons. Every day, students go to school and study a variety of subjects. It means that students must master the new lessons taught in the school and practice them after the lessons to gain a better understanding. Therefore, with the help of the teacher, students can ask difficult exercises for themselves and complete them to improve them to the fullest to help with your academic progress.
Secondly, the reason is that studying alone is distracting and boring. If a person doesn’t understand a concept then that person loses interest and gets distracted to other things. Having a teacher makes us to focus on our studies, or if bored makes the subject interesting by giving more examples or by changing teaching technique. For instance, my teacher used to give as puzzle games to solve when we were bored, this helped us to refresh our mind and puzzle games helps to increases concentration.
Some may argue that two these above reasons are not persuasive enough to demonstrate the statement, providing evidence that learning on their own can make them increase a variety of skills such as inquisitiveness, creative and so on. However, we cannot reach the conclusion that studying with a teacher is not necessary without considering concrete examples.
In conclusion, I believe that learning with a teacher is better than on my own. They teach us a lot of meaningful and helpful lessons to increase our knowledge and give us a huge motivation to continue learning in a good way to touch our bright future.
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