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It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.
According to an announcement, my government will build a new high school in my community. I think that it is good news. I agree with them on this plan, because there is more opportunity for younger go to school, and students and their parent get more convenient in time. Some details are explained as follow.
First, having a new high school also means that younger have more chance to register to school. Before that, these people could not enter the school due to financial reason. Basically, their parent can not support them for expensive living fee to live far away home. Additionally, a few younger play an important role in earning money for their family by part-time jobs such as rearing crow or chicken, growing vegetable…ect. Hence, they can not give up their work for learning in school far home; as a result, they are interrupted studying. A new built high school can help them return a class. Since, they can go to school haft of day, and help their family in the rest time. This not only brings a learning chance for younger, but also gives them more bright future.
Second, students and their parent get more comfortable time as the school near home. Students will not worry about tiredness thus long way that they have to pass to go school, or get up early every day. Consequently, they highly have concentration on a lesson in class and can earn good point in exams. About their parent, they also save a lot of time for their jobs; for they don’t must spend time on picking up their children to go school and come back home every day.
In summary, I agree on building a new high school in community, since many benefits are generated from it. One of them is that creates more opportunity for younger to go school. Before that, they discontinued studying because of lack money for learning far home. Also, students and their parent get more convenient in daily schedule. This helps them obtain high capacity in their job. Besides, there are also other benefits in the plan that i can not make a list.
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