Is your generation different from your parent's generation?

Hi ,

Its my first trial to write an essay and just picked up the topic from the forum. Please do give me your feedback on this so that I can improve on the writing section. All the comments are appreciated.

Generation changes from time to time and so as the thoughts, perspectives, living style and much more. If we analyse our lifes, then we will see how we are diffenet from our parents in terms of lot of things. And this difference is nothing but a difference in generation which will continue from one generation to another. Below are few points that I have given to certain difference.

First of all, the most important difference is the Education which leads to job, money, living stlye and reputation. In my generation, we have all the facilities and opportunities to get education and learn more and more. There are so many schools, colleges and universities that help us to achieve our educational goals. And which ultimately lead us to have a brightening and successful future.

Secondly, the difference in the generation is in terms of technology. Today, there is revolution in technology in every field. Be it computers, other electronic gadgets, science or any other field.
Also, these days our lives have become more dependent on machines and we all have become lethargic as compared to our parents who used to do most of their regular tasks themselves and stay active.

Moreover, one major differene is in the mindsets which varies from generation to generation. Our thinkings changes from time to time and a genaration gap always exists. I remember, me and mother having arguments for a lomg time on certain topics beacuse of different opinions. And,finally, both of us ending up the discussion by saying ‘You won’t undertsnad. Its just the generation gap’.

To sum up, by stating the above statements, I can say that our generation is very much different from our parents generation. And, I think, this difference will continue in the coming generations as well.

TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture from an Art History class

GenerationS change from time to time and so as AS DO the thoughts, perspectives, living style and much more.

If we analyse our LIVES, then we will see how we are DIFFERENT from our parents in terms of lotS of things, and this difference is nothing but a difference in generation, which will continue from one generation to another. Below are A few points that I have given to certain ILLUSTRATE THE differenceS.

First of all, the most important difference is OUR education which leads to US FINDING BETTER jobS, MORE money, A MORE MODERN living stlye and OUR reputationS.

In my generation, we have all the facilities and opportunities to get education and learn more and more. There are so many schools, colleges and universities that help us to achieve our educational goals and which ultimately lead us to have a brightening and successful future.

Secondly, the difference in the generation is in terms of technology. Today, there is A revolution in technology in every field, be it computers, other electronic gadgets, science or any other field.
Also, these days our lives have become more dependent on machines and we all have become lethargic as compared to our parents who used to do most of their regular tasks themselves and stay active.

Moreover, one major difference is in the mindsets which varies from generation to generation. Our MODERN WAY OF thinking changes from time to time and a genEration gap always exists.
I remember, me and mother MY MOTHER AND I having arguments for a LONG time on certain topics BECAUSE of differING opinions. And finally both of us ending up the discussion by saying ‘You CANNOT UNDERSTAND, IT IS just the generation gap’.

To sum up, by stating the above statements, I can say that our generation is very much different from our parents generation. And, I think, this difference will continue in the coming generations. as well
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Good morning Sonav. This was, as a first attempt, a good essay.
I found your speaking voice to be confident, clear, and articulate … however you speak too quickly, leading to the inevitable tumble and hesitation as a consequence.
Slow down and you will achieve perfection.
I look forward to further submissions from you.

Kitos.

Good morning Kitos.
Thanks a lot for your valuable feedback.
I would definitely work on the mistakes and improve. Also, I will try to speak slowly and post recording for the feedback.
You are really a great help to the forum members.

Regards,
Sonav