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Hello. Please could you check if this email is correct.

The Brno Public Library expresses deep gratitude for the book donated in your name. Undoubtedly, this publication will be of interest to our library and its readers. It is devoted to a wide range of topics. These aspects are also urgent among the Czechian researchers. This circumstance makes your gift more valuable. The book has already been written into the Gift Book of our library and, afterwards, it will take deserving place at the library holdings.

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The Brno Public Library expresses deep gratitude for the book donated in your name. Undoubtedly this publication will be of interest to our library members because it covers a wide range of topics which are of importance to Czechian researchers. This makes your gift even more valuable. The book has already been referenced in the Gift Book of our library and it will take a deserving place in the library holdings.

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Thank you, Bev!