Is this a good introduction paragraph for ielts writing 2 essay?

Hi everone! First of all, I miss you all of them. I am really working a lot recently. So, I had not enough time in order to write or reply something on forum. Now, I wonder your feedback about my introduction paragraph. Please let me know your comments.

These days, automobiles are drived thanks to artificial intelligence. This is due to advancement in technology and it is positive development because it can reduce amount of traffic accidents.

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These days cars are capable of driving autonomously by artificial intelligence. This is due to an advancement in technology and it is a positive development because it helps reduce traffic and the number of accidents.

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Thank you sir for your response.

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