Hello Alan, Mister Micawber, Beeesneees, Mordant and other native English speakers,
California’s Japanese Americans still smart under the memory of internment camps during World War II.
[This is a sample sentence from a vocabulary book, so there’s no context I can provide you with.]
Does this sentence sound good to you?
- …internment camps during World War II.
- …internment camps [color=red]used during World War II.
Does the second sound better?