In some countries,some high school leavers are choosing to work or tra

In some countries,some high school leavers are choosing to work or travel for a period of time before going to the university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for those school leavers’ decision. Give your own opinion and reasons using your own experience.

Nowadays an increasing number of high school graduates are determined to seek jobs or take trips before their receiving higher education. ,which is a frequent topic of discussion. The pros and cons of it will be discussed below.

By and large, high school graduates having experienced plenty of stress and burden in their schools need to get close to nature to relax themselves. Hence, traveling may be their top choice .Besides , it nobly contributes to the self-improvement of students .On a personally level ,only by working could adolescents learn more independence , self-confidence and social skills and gain a broader perspective towards the world ,which can by no means be acquired from their teachers.

In stark contrast, there are certainly dangerous in taking such a long break . Academically ,since youngsters are busy with their jobs or travel during such period of time ,they may neglect to continue their education and even get sidetracked from their studies . So it is likely for them to fail to keep up with the pace of study in the college and lose the good study habits and sense of discipline they had when they were in a formal academic structure. Besides , because of lack of sociability and work experience, teenagers hastily entering into the society will result in their unbridled behaviors and some of the extremists may commit crimes and betray the law. Furthermore, they may become so pragmatic and naive that the profound working experience is not available for the people not qualified.

Personally ,I fully sanction that in order to earn a higher income all their lives ,school leavers should make full use of educational resources which they have to further their studies instead of taking a year-long break

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In some countries,some high school leavers are choosing to work or travel for a period of time before going to the university. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for those school leavers’ decision. Give your own opinion and reasons using your own experience.

Nowadays an increasing number of high school graduates are determined to seek jobs or take trips before their receiving higher education. ,which is a frequent topic of discussion. The pros and cons of it will be discussed below.

By and large, high school graduates having experienced plenty of stress and burden in their schools need to get close to nature to relax themselves. Hence, traveling may be their top choice .Besides , it nobly contributes to the self-improvement of students .On a personally level ,only by working could adolescents learn more independence , self-confidence and social skills and gain a broader perspective towards the world ,which can by no means be acquired from their teachers.

In stark contrast, there are certainly dangerous dangers in taking such a long break . Academically ,since youngsters are busy with their jobs or travel during such periods of time ,they may neglect to continue their education and even get sidetracked from their studies . So It is likely for them to fail to keep up with the pace of study in the college(,) and lose the good study habits and sense of discipline they had when they were in a formal academic structure. Besides , because of lack of sociability and work experience, teenagers hastily entering into the society will result in their unbridled behaviors(,) and some of the extremists may commit crimes and /betray/BREAK/ the law. Furthermore, they may become so pragmatic and naive that the profound working experience is not available for the people not qualified.

Personally ,I fully sanction that in order to earn a higher income all their lives ,school leavers should make full use of educational resources which they have to further their studies instead of taking a year-long break
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A good essay Kenny, spoiled by your total lack of correct punctuation.

Kitos. 8/10