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Some countries encourage teenagers to have part-time job and see it as a good thing, while others disagree. Give your opinion and explain both views.
A couple of nations persuade youngsters to get a part-time work and tend to believe for its positivity, while others negates the thought. In this essay ill give insights to both views and eventually stand my ground why being a young working person is not a good practice.
Doing some extra activity to earn money is very common throughout any nations, this is usually being done by college students. An example of this are people who lived in puberty, their family already struggles to have a food in their plate and education becomes a necessity to them. In effect, teenagers are force to work to cater not only to sustain their school but also to provide the things hes family needs. With this in mind, doing part-time task is beneficial to people particularly to those in need.
On the other hand, a people rejects the idea of a sideline job, cause of its negative impact to the juvenile people in terms of their study. This primarily revolves to the fact that education wants a lot of time and focus to absorb all information presented by any topic in the class. This knowledge given to the young ones treats as a pillar of what they will become in the near future. According to Eastern Samar State University Research 70% of student who
undergo work while they are studying cant focus everyday during class, which leads up to having low grades or even worst, failing it. Thus, there is a significant point to consider that teens who is studying should stay focus on the course they are pursuing.
To conclude, I believe that students should primarily focus on their studies since this is what molds them in the future, but, sometimes the world is cruel and people needed to work to cater their demand, thus, thorough support should be given from both family and the government to ensure the childs dreams.