I was wondering if you could tell me my mistakes

English as a Second Language Preparation for and help with the TOEFL® Test and
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Hi
I’m Mohammad and I have started to write about topics that we can usually see in TOEFL exams.
I was wondering if you could comment on my mistakes in my posts
This is my blog:http://mdaghaghzadeh.blogspot.com/

Thanks,
Regards

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