I need help on my essay at new foreign school

Actually I’m not preparing to do TOEFL test but I see this is a very good site where I can improve my skill.I just wonder if I need help on my essay but don’t want to post on here because it’s 2-page long. Can I have any help by sending my essay to the site’s mailbox?

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a student and a campus patrolman

Good morning Ann, the whole purpose of this Forum thread is that all members get the benefit of the efforts of others work and corrections.

I would suggest that you break your work into four sections and post each one as a separate offering.

We are here to help in whatever way we can.