I have sometimes met with such sentences as:
The tour program that is bla bla bla… works well.
The short predicate with a very long subject or the modifier seems quite awkward. Are there any good ways or principles to rewrite such a sentence?
There are many things you could try. The method to choose depends on the sentence and its context.
- There is a tour program that is bla bla bla, and it works well.
- This tour program works well, because it is bla bla bla / although it is bla bla bla
Thank you so much, Sir/Ma’am, for your helpful comment.