how schools help new student with their troubles?

Topic 172: when students move to new schools, they sometime face problems. How can schools help these students with their problems.
Essay:

When students move to new schools, there are many issues which will become obstacles for them to overcome, such as finding acomodation or feeling alone. Schools will play a critical role to help student to resolve their problems because of experiences and responsibility. As far as I am concerned, schools should have the well orientation and hold a lot of activities for new students in order to help them to adapt to new schools quickly and easily.

To begin with, giving entirely and carefully orientation for new students will reduce a lot of troubles for students. Since students move to new schools, all things in there are strange to them. Therefore, they can make some mistakes, such as confusing about schedules or being difficult to live in dorms. In the orientation, consultants from schools can explain and introduce everything about schools in specific for students, and they can answer any question of new students. If the orientation is well, they will make new comers to be similar to schools. As a result, new students will avoid making mistakes and having problems.

In addition, one common trouble of new students is lack of friends and relationships in new schools; so they may feel bored and have poor performances in classes. Holding many activities among old and new students is a good way to support and encourage new students to expand their relationships. While new students participate many activities, such as parties, concerts or sport festivals, they will have a lot of chance to meet others and make friend with them. Moreover, if new students have many friends and wide relationship with old students, they can gain experiences from old students which are helpful for them in new schools.

In conclusion, starting in new schools will never be easy for students because they always have to deal with a lot issues. Therefore, new students need the good orientation from schools and a lot of activities which are created by schools in order to live and study better in new schools.

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Topic 172: when students move to new schools, they sometime face problems. How can schools help these students with their problems.
Essay:

When students move to new schools, there are many issues which will become obstacles for them to overcome, such as finding acComModation or feeling alone. Schools will play a critical role IN helpING studentS to resolve their problems because of experiences and responsibility. As far as I am concerned, schools should BE well ORGANISED and hold a lot of activities for new students in order to help them to adapt to THE new schools quickly and easily.

To begin with, giving entirely and careful orientation for new students will reduce a lot of troubles for studentsTHEM. Since students move to new schools, all things in there are strange to them. Therefore, they can make some mistakes, such as confusing about schedules or being FINDING IT difficult to live in dorms. In the orientation, consultants from schools can explain and introduce everything about schools in specific DETAIL for students, and they can answer any question of new students. If the orientation is well, they will make new comers to be similar FAMILIAR to THEIR schools. As a result, new students will avoid making mistakes and having problems.

In addition, one common trouble of new students is THE lack of friends and relationships in new schools; so they may feel bored and have poor performances in classes. Holding many activities among old and new students is a good way to support and encourage new students to expand their relationships. While new students participate IN many activities, such as parties, concerts or sport festivals, they will have a lot of chanceS to meet others and make friendS with them. Moreover, if new students have many friends and wide relationshipS with old students, they can gain experiences from THESE students which WILL BE helpful for them in THEIR new schools.

In conclusion, starting in new schools will never be easy for students because they always have to deal with a lot issues. Therefore, new students need the good orientation from schools and a lot of activities SHOULD BE created by schools in order to live and study better. in new schools.

This is not up to your usual standard Lam. What happened?

Kitos. 7.5/10

Hi Kitos, I was bad mooth when I was writing this essay! so, I will try to resolve my errors! thanks Kitos