Homeschooling

In recent years, more and more parents decide the homeschooling, rather than sending their children to the school. In this decision play some parameters very important role, such as rising violence in schools, losing control of parents on their children’s personal growth, degeneration among the youth, increasing school expenses.

To begin with, schools are not so safe place anymore. Particularly in recent years, violence in schools is dramatically increased. Through in mentally damaging sized competition in subjects, violence incentive programs, and decreasing time for relaxing caused violence in schools. Furthermore, sometimesthe threat come out of the school factors. Some mentally ill people can hurt or even kill children. For instance, I have today read a new attack to children in a school in China, and five children are hurt. On the contrary, parents strongly believe that their homes more safe place, since they have there huge control on children.

Additionally, in recent decades, parents are losing their influence on personal growth of their children. Children are more affected by environment related factors, such as TV, Internet, trends, and above all affect of their friends which is very big paradigm, because a good friend can provide more positive contribute than parent’s. However, a bad friend might create irreparable damage on our children’s charecter, success, and even health. As you know, smoking,excessive alcohol consumption, using drugs and so on, such a bad habits are arised as a result of friendship with bad friends.

What is more, school expenses of children is rising extremely year by year, and for many parents it creates financial problems, but if their children are not go to the school, their children’s food and transportation expenses will be removed.

Finally, number of students per class in schools is steady growing, so teachers have became overchallenged, and they are not able to concern indivudually their students, which deteriorates quality of education. In contrast, through homeschooling studens are taking one to one education, so they can rise their performance and success in their subjects.

Summing up, although education in schools have undeniable advantages, recent negative developments have undermined them. Moreover, concept in the world is going indiviualism. Because of this and reason I mentioned above are sound proofs of transition from school to homes.

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In recent years, more and more parents HAVE decideD TO ADOPT the home-schooling SYSTEM rather than sending their children to the school. In this decision some parameters play A very important role, such as rising violence in schools, losing control of parents on their children’s personal growth, degeneration among the youth, increasing school expenses.

To begin with, schools are not so safe placeS any more. Particularly in recent years, violence in schools HAS dramatically increased. Through mentally damaging sized competition in subjects, violence incentive programs, and decreasing time for relaxing HAS caused violence in schools. Furthermore, sometimes the threat comeS out of the school factors. Some mentally ill people can hurt or even kill children. For instance, I have today read OF a new attack to children in a school in China, and five children are hurt. On the contrary, parents strongly believe that their homes ARE A more safe place FOR THEIR CHILDREN, since they have there huge control on children.

Additionally, in recent decades, parents are losing their influence on personal growth of their children. Children are more affected by environment related factors, such as TV, Internet, trends, and above all THE affect of their friends which is A very big paradigm, because a good friend can provide more positive contributION than parent’s. However, a bad friend might create irreparable damage on our children’s charActer, success, and even health. As you know, smoking,excessive alcohol consumption, using drugs and so on, such bad habits HAVE ARISEN as a DIRECT result of friendship with bad friends.

What is more, school expenses of children ARE rising extremely year by year, and for many parents it creates financial problems(.) But if their children are not goING to the school, their children’s food and transportation expenses will be removed.

Finally, THE number of students per class in schools is steady growing, so teachers have became over-challenged, and they are not able to BE concernED WITH INDIVIDUAL students, which deteriorates THE quality of THEIR education. In contrast, through homeschooling studens are taking one to one education, so they can RAISE their performance and success in their subjects.

Summing up, although education in schools HAS undeniable advantages, recent negative developments have undermined them. Moreover, concept in the world is going TOWARD indiviDualism. Because of this and THE reasonS I mentioned above, this is sound proof of THE transition from school to homes.

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