Hi Tutors and friend, please help me to correct these sentences

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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  1. Sometimes, there are dreams we wish it came true. But, there are truths we wish it was just a dream.

  2. Come and see me when you finish your report.

  3. Peter has been working / has worked as a secretary for 2 years before his marrige.

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How about:

  1. Sometimes we have dreams we wish to come true. But there are truths we wish to be just dreams.
  2. Come and see me when you finish [have finished] your report.
  3. Peter had been working as a secretary for 2 years before his marriage.
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  1. Peter had worked as a secretary for two years before he got married.
4

Do you consider Past Perf Cont and ‘before his marriage’ inappropriate there, Bev?

5

Not inappropriate, but that tense would need to be used within additional context, whereas ‘had worked’ is more able to stand alone.