hi every one, please help me to correct this query.

[Tuyet8]

Are these sentences right? Please help me to correct them wherever you see trouble. Many thanks.

1. Before a test lesson, I ask my students to close their books and then put them on the head of each table. May I say “close your books and put them on the head of the table”.
2. It is fifty to nine ( when I want to say nine fifty)
3. These shirts are fifty thousands.
4. Do you have any drinks?
5. Find the mistakes in each sentence and then correct them. ( but in each sentence only have a mistake).

[Luschen]

Are these sentences right? Please help me to correct them wherever you see trouble. Many thanks.

1. Before a test lesson, I ask my students to close their books and then put them on the head of each table. May I say “close your books and put them on the head of the table”.
   We do say “sit at the head of the table”, but this sounds odd to me in a classroom - I would say “at the end of the table”
2. It is fifty to nine ( when I want to say nine fifty)
   No, I guess “fifty to nine” would be 8:10, but we only use “to nine” for times after 8:30.
3. These shirts are fifty thousands.
   No, “are fifty thousand”, but I think it would be more clear to say “are fifty thousand each”, unless the whole group of shirts together are fifty thousand, in which case you could say “These shirts altogether are fifty thousand.”
4. Do you have any drinks?
   Sounds good.
5. Find the mistakes in each sentence and then correct them. ( but in each sentence only have a mistake).
   If there is only one, I would say “Find the mistake in each sentence.” or to be more vague and keep your students guessing - “Find the mistakes in the sentences.”

[Tuyet8]

thanks Luschen very much.

Find the mistake in each sentence and then correct them or it.

[Luschen]

“correct it” sounds better

[Tuyet8]

Yes, Luschen. Please help me more.

Is this sentence righ?

She eats luch very little.

[Luschen]

Do you mean “lunch”? If so, this could mean either “She eats very little for lunch.” or “She very seldom eats lunch.”

[Tuyet8]

yes, Luschen, I mean “lunch”

so May I say “she have lunch very little” does this has the same meaning as the former?

[Luschen]

No, your sentence is grammatically incorrect and doesn’t really have a clear meaning. Even if you correct the verb to “She has lunch very little.”, the meaning is still unclear.