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[Odehfreelancer]

i need your help for grammar check :
Dear Sirs
Kindly note that I a claim compensation for delayed flight, as the following detail :

• My flight No.PS162 / FQTV from CPH to KBP / Dep. Time is 13:50, it was delayed to 3 hr. so that I was very tire.
• According to that delay. My next flight from KBP to KIV (FL. PS897) delayed to the next day (24 hours).
• Regarding the accommodation of the 2nd journey, the hotel was not good , the food was not enough , also no free drinks.
• According to the above mention I was very exhausted, and as a result of that situation my meeting was cancelled .
• I am entitled to care and compensation under EU Regulation 261/2004 for a delayed arrival time of more than three hours .
• Looking forward to get your reply.

[Luschen]

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@Odehfreelancer

i need your help for grammar check :
Dear Sirs
Kindly note that I [am claiming] compensation for [my] delayed flight, as [per] the following [details]:

• My flight No.PS162 / FQTV from CPH to KBP / [with a departure time of] 13:50, it was delayed to 3 [hours]=,] so that I was very [tired].
• [Due to] to that delay. My next flight from KBP to KIV ([flight] PS897) [was] delayed to the next day (24 hours).
• Regarding the accommodation [before] the 2nd [leg of my flight], the [quality of the] hotel was [unacceptable] , the food was [inadequate] , [and] also [there were] no free drinks.
• According to the [reasons mentioned] above mention I was very exhausted, and as a result of that situation my meeting was cancelled .
• I am entitled to care and compensation under EU Regulation 261/2004 for a delayed arrival time of more than three hours .
• Looking forward to get your reply.