1.It will count on summary performance when TCM facility available more than 7 hours.
2.It will be counted on summary performance when TCM facility available within 7 hours
TCM( is refers to company’s name).
How about the grammar err? Thanks for your help.
I’m not sure exactly what you are trying to say, Yordanus, so my answer is based on my guesses in that respect.
The company’s performance summary will indicate where TCM’s facilities are used for both less than and more than 7 hours.
OK,Thanks for help.How about this notification letter?Is it grammatically or not?Kindly please be informed that effective on 28-June-2010, Our e-Travel (TA) will Re-apply Dual-Approval instead of Single-Approval for Overseas Travelling and Accomodation request.
Please notice that this policy only valid for all international ticket and hotel inquiries, while domestic (routes among Indonesia) arrangement will remain Single-Approval as state in the DOA (Manager and Up).
Thank you very much for your kind attention and cooperation,
Best regards
Kindly please [color=green](Choose either ‘kindly’ or ‘please’ - don’t use both together.) be informed that effective on [color=green](Unless it is only effective on that one day, use ‘from’ not ‘on’) 28 June 2010, our e-Travel (TA) will re-apply Dual-Approval instead of Single-Approval for Overseas Travelling and Accomodation request.
Please noticenote that this policy is only valid for all international ticket and hotel inquiries. Domestic (routes among within Indonesia) arrangements will remain Single-Approval as stated in the DOA (Manager and Up).
Thank you very much for your kind attention and cooperation,
Best regards,
[color=green]I’m not sure about {Manager and Up). What’s the ‘DOA’?