Governments throughout the world should make education compulsory for all citizie

Gulcan01 · January 23, 2011, 9:08am

Governments throughout the world should make education compulsory for all citiziens until college level. Do u agree or disagree with the statement?
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In today’s world, with the increase in well-educated people, being graduated from a college has become an inevitable element in our lives.Although some people do not care about this subject, it is obvious that governments should make education compulsory until college level.Today’s high competitive society and raising the status society can be regarded as the primary causes of this subject.

To begin with today’s high competitive society, it can be asserted that in today’s world there are a lot of people who suffer from being unemployed.Considering the fact that well-educated people are more preferred by companies, it is necessary for one to be be knowledgeable about his work in order for his to have a good job.In addition, especially in modern socities there is no need to one who did not graduate from college.Briefly, it is an obvious fact that one wants to find a good job and live a comfortable life have to be well-educated.

When it comes to raising the status society, it can be easily said that the more well-educated people the government has, the more improved it is about economy and politics.Thanks to this, one graduated from college has an advantage of having a comfortable life.Thus, he can live in a welfare during his the life-time.Consequently, the government can rise its status thanks to educated people, which provide people with satisfactory salaries.

On the other hand, some who do not support the idea of making education compulsory until college level generally assert that some individuals prefer to work after high school.In this way, these kind of people can have an experience about life in the early age and support financially not only their families but also themselves.However, one who do not go to college can regret about giving up its education because there are a lot of advantages of being graduated from college such as health oppurtunity and being retirement easily and etc.

In conclusion, today's high competitive society and raising the status society can be regarded as the causes of why governments should make education compulsory until college level.I think that one who wants to live comfortably should be graduated from college because in today's world, finding a good job is getting more and more difficult.

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Remula · January 23, 2011, 3:09pm

Gulcan01:

Governments throughout the world should make education compulsory for all citiziens until college level. Do u agree or disagree with the statement?
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In today’s world, with the increase in OF well-educated people, being graduated from a college has become an inevitable element in our lives. Although some people do not care about this subject, it is obvious that governments should make education compulsory until college level.Today’s high competitive society and raising the status society can be regarded as the primary causes of this subject.

To begin with today’s high competitive society, it can be asserted that there are a lot of people who suffer from being unemployed in today’s world .Considering the fact that well-educated people are more preferred by companies, it is necessary for one to be be knowledgeable about his work in order for his to have a good job.In addition, especially there is no need to FOR one who did not graduate from college in modern socities .Briefly, it is an obvious fact that one wantsING to find a good job and live a comfortable life have to be well-educated.
When it comes to raising the status society, it can be easily said that the more well-educated people the government has, the more [s]improved it is about [/s]DEVELOPED economy and politics IT MAY GET.Thanks to this, one graduated from college has an advantage of having a comfortable life.Thus, he can live in a welfare during his [s]the [/s]life-time.Consequently, the government can rise its status thanks to educated people, which provide people with satisfactory salaries.

On the other hand, some who do not support the idea of making education compulsory until college level(,) generally assert that some individuals prefer to work after high school.In this way, [u]these kind of[/u] SUCH people can have an [u]experience about life[/u] HANDS-ON EXPERIENCE [s]in [/s] AT the early age(,) and support financially not only their families(,) but also themselves.However, one who do not go to college can regret about giving up its education(,) because there are a lot of advantages of being graduated from college such as health oppurtunity and being retirement easily and etc.

In conclusion, today's high competitive society and raising the status society can be regarded as the reasons [s]of [/s] why governments should make  education compulsory until college level.I think that one who wants to live comfortably should be graduated from college(,) because in today's world, finding a good job is getting more and more difficult.
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