Does the Gov should spend money for exploring outer space or on people basic need

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Does the Gov should spend money for exploring outer space or on people basic needs?

Learning how to spend money is necessary financial skill for us and the government. Actually, we are all investors in our society, just various targets we own. Thus, what we should do is to realize that what do need most? Or what can brings the most benefits for us. What does Gov should do, in my opinion, is spend money for people basic needs. The reasons as following.
First of all. People has rights to own the best Health-care for themselves. We should to stimulate the Government to spend adequate bills for Health-care program, which is exactly the basic needs for most of us. It is true that having a well Health-care system is much more sophisticated than we thought, but we deserve the best for our life. Since it’s not just only about the politics and power, but also concern the stabilization of our life and society. Therefore, the Government spends enough money for making Health-care program running well is vital and compulsory.
Secondly. To build a foundation is another method that could produces plentiful upsides for latter-day society.
For one thing, the foundation could offer some scholarship for students who need to finish their academic career. Perhaps, creating some non-profit schools for special education. As we know, compare to the healthy children,the handicapped kids may not have the equal chance to study in schools. Thus, those kids deserve the same opportunity to study in schools.
For another, having some factories or markets could bring Gov the solution of unemployment. After economic slump, the global economic starts to resuscitate, people needs job, so the new factories and markets are another chances for people who needs to start over.
In conclusion, I’m totally convinced that our government should to spend money for people basic needs. Since The health-care, career, and education are most segments in our life. Besides,the essence of government is brings the best life for people.

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Does the Gov should spend money for exploring outer space or on people basic needs?

Learning how to spend money is A necessary financial skill for BOTH /OURSELVES/us/ and the government.
Actually, we are all investors in our society. just various targets we own.
Thus, what we should do is to /realize/ASK/ that what do WE need most, or what can bring the most benefits for us?
What does THE GOVERNMENT should do, in my opinion, is spend money for people’S basic needs. The reasons as following.

First of all. People HAVE THE RIGHT to /own/OBTAIN/ the best Health-care for themselves. We should to /stimulate/ENCOURAGE/ the Government to spend /adequate bills/MORE MONEY ON A DECENT for Health-care program, which is exactly the basic need for most of us. It is true that having a GOOD Health-care system is much more sophisticated TO ORGANISE than we AT FIRST thought, but we deserve the best for our life, since it’s not just only about the politics and power, but IT also concernS the stabilization of our life and society.
Therefore, the Government OUGHT TO spend enough money for making A Health-care program WHICH running well is vital and SHOULD BE compulsory.

Secondly. To build a foundation is another method that could produce plentiful upsides for latter-day society.
For one thing, the foundation could offer some scholarship TO students who need to finish their academic careerS, perhaps creating some non-profit schools for special education. As we know, compareD to the OTHER healthy children the handicapped kids may not have AN equal chance to study in schools. Thus, those kids deserve the same opportunity to study in schools.

For another, having some factories or markets could bring THE GOVERNMENT the solution TO unemployment.
After AN economic slump, the global economic starts to resuscitate, people needs job, so the new factories and markets are another chance for people who need to start over.

In conclusion, I’m totally convinced that our government should spend MORE money for people basic needsTO MEET THE BASIC NEEDS OF PEOPLE, BECAUSE health-care, careerS, and education are THE most IMPORTANT segments in our LIVES.

The essence of government is TO bring the best life for people.
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Good morning Svbla. Your essay was crammed full of good suggestions, and all in all, not badly written.
Perhaps if you were to read a few English magazines or newspapers you would acquire the manner in which most people write.There is absolutely nothing at all wrong in your essay that a little more knowledge wouldn’t very quickly put right.
Thank you for posting your essay. I found it interesting.

Kitos. 7/10

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Thanks.
I don’t know if this is my test essay, then how many score I could have?!!
I need more than a “fair”.

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I don’t think that we can answer such a question my friend, but 70% is more than fair in my view.
If you were to write as good as this in your exam, with just a little more use of vocabulary, then you should do much better than fair.
Your strong point is that you have demonstrated your ability to think well. you now have to put those thoughts down on paper in a clearly understandable fashion.

You are up to the task, don’t worry.

Kitos.

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Dear Sir,
Greetings.

Cudn’t record my essay here. Hence posting my essay in following reply…

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Hello Sir,
Please evaluate my essay based on the same topic discussed in this thread…

Science & technology are much more in its advanced state than it was in centuries ago. It has opend the doors of opportunity not only to get knowledge about the enviornment around us, but also to explore the worlds or universe that exist beyond our world. So, does the space technology. Russia’s Sputnik became the pioneer to this trend & America’s Apollo mission became the stepping stone for advancement to Lunar mission. And now many developing countries including China, India are spending their funds on such programs. This has become rather, a necessity for revealing a nation’s progress & increase the self esteem of a nation in a field of technology. But this kind of projects are very costly & expenses are large enough to serve a small state or big city. Inspite of high funds involvement, I suggest to carry out such programs for the betterment of future genrations. The reason supporting for this opinion are mere justifiable.

First of all, projects for outer space includes the detail study of existing knowledge & the feasbility of such mission. This involves lot of hardship & it makes many nations come together & share their ideas. This enhances high values of work ethics such as working in a team to achieve a common goal. Due to knowledge churning & study, more & more things are discovered & more new techniques are adopted. This leads to more advanced knowledge and newly recognised concepts. So overall, this kind of governement programs lead to progress at science & technology level. Thus ultimately an easier & better future for mankind.

Furthermore, we can discover more places other than mother earth for viablity & availability to inhabit by exploring outer space. Day by day living space on earth is becoming densed & growing lesser & lesser to live. This causes deforestation in large scale & ultimately engenders global warming & climate change in broader sense. Exploring outer space, thus increases the chances of discovering an alternative place to live & thrive life existed on earth. Take for instance, the India’s lunar mission, which leads to the discovery of water on the surface of moon. This increases the chances of serviving on the surface moon. In near future, global thinktank is pondering on the ways to set up even human colonies on moon too. Going further ahead, Scientists are planning to make arrangements for people to live in space. This can majorly solve our issues related to over-population.

Now exploring outer space can make us safe from outside celestial bodies such as comets, asteroids or even small planets. During Jurasic era, animals present on the earth were extinguished by collision of a comet. So there still lies a fear of such collision in future also. Exploration leads to understanding of the revolving path of such celestial bodies. It will help us to make sure our planet is secured from these kind of threats. Hubble telescope is the perfect example of it, which continuously monitors activities in outer space day & night thus, protecting us from such potential hazards. This really helps us feel more safe & secure. Also the future genrations will also be helped by such initiatives.

So conclusively, I would say exploring the outer space is not only the necessity for individual group of people or for nation but also it’s a need of time & obviously for the good of future human generations. So I strongly recommend such programs has to be undertaken by government bodies.

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