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Many people choose different style-life, some of them like to earn a lot of money to get a high standand life, others like to live comfortable with enough money. People can be many reasons to choose in rich lives, a comfortable life with enough money is good for my life.
With a high-salary job, you can get high life quality, live in better house and bring your children learn in more prestious school. However the high paying job make you be usually absent in party with family and be hard work everyday, even in weekend. Finally in a long time you have not to met and talk to family member, one day you figure out they are strangers and you stay in relationship like being responsiblility.
In the other hand, the more money you earn, the higher duties you are. You are always busy on your business, and worried about them, it causes you feeling stress. In my view, healthy is very important, it is not meaningful when you can earn a lot of money but you don’t have enough time to enjoy. Get a job with a lower that offers you have time to take care family as well as yourself, you can participate vacations on holiday with them that make your life more interesting and almost whenever you can have meal on time.
In brief, have a lot of money is good but not all, as for me, I will be pleasured with a comfortable life with enough money because I think there are still things take care of that is more important than money. Both family and healthy is high valuable to me.
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