Hello,
This is my daily description again!
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Two businessmen are arguing about something.
The men are indicating the paper on the desk.
All of them are wearing ties.
Something serious goes on between two, so could you add some sentence that expresses the tension?
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Two workers are standing facing a canyon.
One of them is standing on the rock.
Both of them are wearing safety helmets. (or working clohtes.)
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Candidates are looking at another places each other. (I mean, looking at another directions)
Some of candidates are holding a file folder.
All candidates are wearing dress shoes.
Thanks in advance,
sweetpumpkin
Let me make a small attempt as your post has remained unanswered.
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Two businessmen are arguing.
It is about some report to be finalized.
The men are pointing on to the paper on the desk.
Both of them are wearing ties.
The young man looks hard to make his point.
Something serious goes on between two, so could you add some sentence that expresses the tension?
(They could also be a teacher and a student)
Two workers are standing facing a canyon.
One of them is standing on the rock.
Both of them are wearing safety helmets. (and working clothes/uniform/overall)
They are discussing the geographical features of the region.
The candidates are awaiting their turn for an interview.
They are looking towards different directions.
Each of them is holding a file folder.
All the candidates are wearing dress shoes.
The indicated corrections to the first two of the original sentences are not required for 1.
‘The young man looks hard to make his point’ does not make much sense. To support that meaning, I suggest:
‘The two men are staring at each other intently.’
In 2, you do not know what they are discussing.
In 3, we don’t know that they are candidates or what they are waiting for and ‘dress shoes’ is a little vague. I presume you mean ‘formal dress shoes’, but why not just say ‘all of them are dressed smartly’.
