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Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In our actual society, many things are changing so fast. It is not the same teenagers of fifty years ago in different ways. Many people say that everybody should have the opportunity of studying until has the majority of age. This essay will discuss some arguments for and against studying until the age of eighteen.
There are several reasons which many people argued that a student should stay at school until be considered by many societies an adult. They believe that at this age a person is psychologically and physically mature for taking many decisions, but always supervised by an adult in this could be her/his parents or a tutor. It goes without saying that it prepares you for your working career because is very crucial preparation from 16 to 18. It gives you skills in different aspects, but principally in aspect of education.
On the contrary, it is possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that is better staying in school until a certain age. They feel that not everybody matures at the same age. As a clear example some teachers argued that a student of sixteen years old may study a technical profession because not all people have the similar skills and also society needs less skilled workers than before.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of the case my personal opinion is that should study until eighteen because it is the same for example as making a house everything needs their time.
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