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Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In my opinion, people usually like to be stable and quiet in their lives. There’s no war, no stress, and no arguments. On the other hand, very interestingly, people want some challenges, adventures, and exciting things as well. If we don’t have these kinds of factors, we would feel very bored.
To begin with, people want to feel alive in their normal lives. it is likely to have an impact, throwing out a stone in a calm river. For example, one of my old friends used to be very introverted when she was in school but she enjoys Bungee jumping and going skydiving every other weekend. I said I have never imagined that you would enjoy those kinds of activities and she answered that she feels alive while playing those sports.
On top of that, people need to achieve in their lives. Think about some people who climb all the mountains including the highest one, the Himalayas. It is very hard and it requires lots of energy and patience and courage. People even take risks of hypothermia, frostbite, and death but it is a kind of addiction to keep doing it because they want to feel achievement and fulfillment.
I firmly believe that people are attracted to dangerous sports and activities to feel alive and achieve something in their lives for the reasons I mentioned above. The importance of feeling stimulation cannot be overestimated in life so that people can keep living their still, stable, and normal lives.