Correction : He swrote to God. [color=blue]The expected answer is possibly “He swore to God” (which may be what you intended to write), but it’s unusual for this to be a complete sentence. Usually “You swear to God that (something)”. I also don’t understand why “GOD” is in capitals in the original, and whether that is another error to be corrected. It seems odd.
Is your dress different than mine?
Correction : Is your dress different than my? [color=blue]No. The expected answer is possibly “Is your dress different from mine?”. However, the status and relative merits of “different from/to/than” are debated.
He inquired whether I live in Newyork.
Correction : He inquired if I live in Newyork. [color=blue]No. Possibly they are expecting “He inquired whether I lived in New York.”
He spoke these words upon his face.
Correction: He spoke these works on his face. [color=blue]I have no idea what is expected. Poor question.
They ran direct to their college.
Correct it please, as I’am not sure about this one [color=blue]This is correct as it stands.
They have been building a wall since three days.
Correction : They have been building a wall for three days. [color=blue]Correct.
He does not have some devotion to his studies.
Correction : He does not have any devotion for his studies. [color=blue]No. Changing “some” to “any” may be what’s expected, but “to” was OK in the original.