Can you check my essay?(Integrated Writing)

The professor disagrees with the decision of International Astronomical Union, that Pluto is not a planet, because it has not all the criteria from the new definition. According to the reading passage, Pluto is considered a dwarf planet.
The lecturer runs the idea that Pluto has all the criteria that needs to be called a planet. Firstly, it orbits the sun. Secondly, it is round in shape that confirms the benchmark. The last norm is that it has objects around it, these can be called moons, and Pluto is the biggest object from its neighborhood. On the contrary, the reading passage says that Pluto does not dominate the region of its orbit, and its gravity causes it to sweep up asteroids. Furthermore, in the reading section is said that many elements are nearly as large as Pluto itself. In a word, Pluto does not qualify. However, the lecturer refuses this claim.
While the reading passage explains that Pluto and its moons are part of objects called the Kuiper Belt, the professor makes clear why is not good to remove Pluto from the solar system. The lecturer states that if Pluto will be called a dwarf planet, it will be more confusing for the society, children, because everyone knows that Pluto is the ninth planet in the solar system. Removing it from the system all the books, museums will have to be changed in this field.
In conclusion, the points raised by the professor contradict the reading passage.

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Hello Miheala, welcome to our forum and many thanks for posting your essay. Can you please also share the reading passage you are referring to?

Maybe @Alan and @Anglophile can give some feedback on Mihaela’s essay too? Many thanks in advance.

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(Mihaela, we welcome you to this forum. Your essay is good. However, I’ve just made an attempt to better its linguistic carriage. Hope it helps)

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Dear Lawrence, thank you so much for your suggestions, they are very useful and valuable.

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