Can the commas be removed?

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
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Here, we reproduce an excerpt from the book, “The Best Stage of My Life”, by actor Adrian Pang, about his experience on working at Mediacorp and how theatre has always been his first love.

Can the commas beside “book” and before “by” be removed?

Thanks.

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To me, the commas look all right and may be retained but not the inverted commas that are redundant here since the title is written in the usual fashion with content words beginning in capital letters.

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