Are there any errors in the sentence, and is the part in boldface correct?

English as a Second Language English Vocabulary, Grammar and Idioms
1

Some people wish to keep living and extend their lifespans, unlike others who dislike their lives and wish to die early.

Are there any errors in the sentence, and is the part in boldface correct?

Thanks.

2 Likes
2

Yes, that’s absolutely fine.

3 Likes