Advertising can tell you a lot. Agree or disagree? SUBJECT EDITED AGAIN

[Rakeshchanda]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Advertising is a smart technique which is used by different companies for different purposes either for selling a product or giving a Message to common people. Advertising now a days is very important because, it tells us what is new product available in market and its use in daily life. Advertising tells a lot about country, I totally agree with the statement, for few reasons.
First and foremost reason is advertising tells you a lot about customs and traditions of country. Advertisement helps in knowing customs cultures and traditions that are specific to that country.For example, in india people are very much particular of cultures and traditions such as women wearing saree and marking with red ink on forehead as adornment and also doing poojas going to temple in morning men wearing kurta and pyjamas. in this way whenever a new person from other country wish to visit india,he may know about its cultures and traditions by looking in to advertisements.
Second reason tells about country’s famous sculptures monuments and tourism spots. Advertising gives whole picture of country’s famous places that stands as tourist attraction.For example in country like America for a new tourist to find country
tourist recreations spots and Musuems Advertising may be a best source because in short he may come to know overall picture of country so that he can plan his schedule as per places he would like to visit.
In short I can say that to know about countrys tourist spots and cultures advertsing is best startegies though somebody may oppose it is good and gives best picture of what one is looking.

TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture on Modern World History

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[Luschen]

Hi Rakeshchanda, I thought your essay was not too bad. You addressed the topic correctly and have a good overall structure. I wish you had included some more specific examples of actual advertisements you have seen (or you could make some up) You talk a lot about customs and tourist destinations, but not much at all about the advertising itself, which should be the main subject of the essay. Your writing is pretty clear, but you do have quite a few mistakes in usage and some awkward sounding sentences. Overall, I would rate this a 3 out of 5.

@Rakeshchanda

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising can tell you a lot about a country. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Advertising is a smart technique which is used by different companies for different purposes[:} either for selling a product or giving a[ m]essage to common people. {this sounds a bit odd to me} Advertising now a days{one word} is very important because, {comma before because, not after} it tells us what is new product [is] available in [the] market and its use in daily life. Advertising tells a lot about [a ]country, I totally agree with the statement, for few {watch out for the difference between “few” and “a few”} reasons.
[The] First and foremost reason is advertising tells you a lot about customs and traditions of country. {this is not a reason, this is restating/answering the question itself} Advertisement[s help] helps in knowing [the] customs[,] cultures and traditions that are specific to that country.For example, in [ I]ndia people are very much particular of {“very much particular of” is incorrect here} cultures and traditions such as women wearing saree and marking [themselves] with red ink on [their] forehead[s ] as adornment and also doing poojas going to temple in morning men wearing kurta and pyjamas. {you need some commas - it is unclear which phrases belong together - do men go to them wearing pyjamas?} in this way whenever a new person from [an]other country wish to visit [ I]ndia,he may know about its cultures and traditions by looking in to [at its] advertisements. {you talk a lot about the customs, but not really much at all about advertisements that feature these customs - how about talking about this commercial - a lot of Indian customs on display here! youtube.com/watch?v=Mpvuz8gg79Q }
Second reason[ is that advertising] tells about [a ]country’s famous sculptures[,] monuments[,] and tourism spots. Advertising gives [the] whole picture of [a ]country’s famous places that stan[d ] as tourist attraction.For example in [a ]country like America[,] for a new tourist to find country
tourist recreatio[n ] spots {this sounds a bit unnatural} and [ m]usuems[, a]dvertising may be a best source because in short he may come to know [the] overall picture of [the] country so that he can plan his schedule as per places he would like to visit. {this is ok, but including more specific and perhaps personal examples would be more relevant - maybe talk about a travel commercial that inspires you to visit the Grand Canyon or the Statue of Liberty in New York City.}
In short I can say that to know about [a ]country]'s] tourist spots and cultures[,] advertsing[advertising] is [one of the] best startegies[strategies, ] though somebody may oppose it is good and gives best picture of what one is looking.{this sentence sounds a bit awkward - maybe divide it into two separate sentences}

TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture on Modern World History